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    What an ultra violent and profanity laced ending that was - good stuff dear. And I'm glad I didn't get shovelled in as the psychopath, my secret is safe for a bit longer. :lol:

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    Wow, what an ending! I'm glad I didn't die too, and I must confess I was shocked when I thought Diva was a gonner! And when I took my shot ...

    Fab work Heather!

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    There are some great one-liners in there! My personal favourite:

    "Anyone who wants justice can take a bullet."

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    so THIS is what Librarians do at xmas... Lol. May i also state that candy Jayne was being a good girl doing ballet lessons whilst ppls were getting murderd.!!!

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    Glad to entertain x Im glad diva and fleur survived to,
    And it's true candy jayne was being a good girl at ballet ,,,
    But there's always room for a sequal.
    Mwa ha ha ha ha ha !

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    Yahh more more
    Diva x

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    Quote Originally Posted by heathersweet View Post
    Glad to entertain x Im glad diva and fleur survived to,
    And it's true candy jayne was being a good girl at ballet ,,,
    But there's always room for a sequal.
    Mwa ha ha ha ha ha !
    But But But... :cry: Im a good Little dolly girl... Who likes her ballet and dolls. Why would ANYONE want to murder me.... Heather.. you were there when i was shining that evil woman i perform withs (Fayette Chaos) Latex... Do I honestly look like murder material??? :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

    Ahaha.

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    Not to me but to a psychopath killer your a sweet entray to a slaughter sandwhich.

    maybe in a week or so i'll come up with something new.x

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    I like it as it is (I would say that, I survived) and I don't think it needs a sequel - but if you do write one then make sure you follow the Scream sequel rules !

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    funily enough im not familiar with those, but i have the feeling it may entail a get out clause in which the hero / heroines live on to fight another day in the trilogy or prequal.? ? ?

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